1. avatar paperandsticks
    Hey...

    I uploaded a new track on myspace.. was wondering if u would like to have listen.

    the song is a bit long at the min i'm currently trying to cut it down.

    any feedback would help as i'm currently mastering it and need to find out if it works or not.

    the song is called "It depends"

    cheers.

    www.myspace.com/paperandsticks
  2. avatar Nocarsgo
    That's a cracking track. Strings are a bit cheesy though. Obviously it's a rough track but combined with a few horns live, it could be pretty magical.
  3. avatar the*optimist
    My thoughts too! (although I liked the strings!) Your voice is cracking and very distinctive and the chorus lyrics are lovely!
  4. avatar paperandsticks
    Thanks for the feedback! really appreciate it. It is a rough track as i cant afford the equipment to do exactly what i want.. i'm going to get booked into a studio soon though.

    I'm going to try and get a few gigs in belfast in the next couple of weeks too..

    do you know anyone that plays Horns? i've got a clarinet, organ (well.. nearly) and guitar players so far.
  5. avatar paperandsticks
    Hey..

    I've just added an instrumental track.. its just a a demo but i'm keen to hear what you think

    the track is called 'The Orchard'..

    thanks
  6. avatar JTM
    [quote:7301b6477d="paperandsticks"]Hey..

    I've just added an instrumental track.. its just a a demo but i'm keen to hear what you think

    the track is called 'The Orchard'..

    thanks[/quote:7301b6477d]

    I reckon that track would make sincerely beautiful incidental music for a film or TV programme. It still needs some work, but I really think there's a home for the music you make.

    EDIT: I also listened to "It Depends" and it's very nice indeed. Shades of Lennon and Elliot Smith going on there. Mix needs work but the production ideas lift an what could be an ordinary song up very well.
  7. avatar tenrabbits
    I really like "It Depends" - got a very Bon Iver feel to me, and that's always a good thing!
  8. avatar paperandsticks
    thanks for the feedback!

    i just uploaded another demo track 'drones'..

    thanks very much.
  9. avatar paperandsticks
    new demo's added.

    thanks.