1. avatar dolphin bombers
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_obq93TtiIE
  2. avatar Captain Kennedy
    I would love to hear John and Edward's take on that one.
  3. avatar thecubanboys
    Good grief
  4. avatar dolphin bombers
    ok
  5. avatar dolphin bombers
    give me a fuckin break im trying
  6. avatar dolphin bombers
    ps i know i cant sing or dance and im olso fkig ugly but listen to the words in the name of fuckery listen to the words
  7. avatar voidio
    Look, i'm no Michael Jackson, I can't dance either, but i don't record it on my phone,..put it on youtube/Fastfude for people to critique it! Not a wise move!... well that's a bit harsh on the Fuders, if there is talent, they will praise,...but in this case... don't hold your breath!
    And i don't mean that to be cruel, the lyrics aren't bad at all, but keep them safe, work on your band, write some good music to go with your lyrics, record it, then post for feedback!
    Keep the faith!!!
  8. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:5bbd294439="voidio"]Look, i'm no Michael Jackson, I can't dance either, but i don't record it on my phone,..put it on youtube/Fastfude for people to critique it! Not a wise move!... well that's a bit harsh on the Fuders, if there is talent, they will praise,...but in this case... don't hold your breath!
    And i don't mean that to be cruel, the lyrics aren't bad at all, but keep them safe, work on your band, write some good music to go with your lyrics, record it, then post for feedback!
    Keep the faith!!![/quote:5bbd294439] thanks voido who r you again srry jump of the band wagon u were being kind srry no offence
  9. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:d7f2aa695c="voidio"]Look, i'm no Michael Jackson, I can't dance either, but i don't record it on my phone,..put it on youtube/Fastfude for people to critique it! Not a wise move!... well that's a bit harsh on the Fuders, if there is talent, they will praise,...but in this case... don't hold your breath!
    And i don't mean that to be cruel, the lyrics aren't bad at all, but keep them safe, work on your band, write some good music to go with your lyrics, record it, then post for feedback!
    Keep the faith!!![/quote:d7f2aa695c] thanx mate u sound like a cool guy im just getting frustrated the song is so good i cant hold it back anymore
  10. avatar palrub
    constructively;

    pass on the lyrics to a band or write them for a bandmate i.e. singer - but i don't think you have what it takes to front a band.

    melody motif is alright for a 15second listen but then gets repetitive and thus boring. lyrically it's good but variation on the chorus would do the song a world of good. personally i think it draws draws too many parallels with Lonestar's [i:fd162fab71]I'm Already There[/i:fd162fab71] but many bands sing about the same things so can't fault you there.
  11. avatar artyfufkin
    the only positive thing anyone (including yourself) has suggested about the clip is that the lyrics have some worth and I'm sorry but I find them very cheesy and unoriginal. I'm obviously missing something here. someone please enlighten me.
  12. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote="artyfufkin"]the only positive thing anyone (including yourself) has suggested about the clip is that the lyrics have some worth and I'm sorry but I find them very cheesy and unoriginal. I'm obviously missing something here. someone please enlighten me.[/quote thanx for your kind words
  13. avatar Hors D'oeuvres
    well i think that this is positively lovely and warms the heart.
  14. avatar VimFuego
    I like it cos its the same 15second melody repeated for 3 and a half minutes, i think the fact you had a cold when you recorded it adds to the likeability factor. If you sang that to Simon Cowell and that lot, I think you would be assured of greatness.
  15. avatar artyfufkin
    [quote:b948d057cf]thanx for your kind words[/quote:b948d057cf]

    I thought I was being kind. I could've said a whole lot more. Would you rather I told you it was amazing when I don't think it is? Why did you post it?
  16. avatar salfhal
    [quote:ff71b49c18="dolphin bombers"]our first demo<ps its dodgy>[/quote:ff71b49c18]

    Jeezzzzz

    This isn't a demo... Nor is it a band. Please take peoples' comments on board.
  17. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:f96d7974fc="Hors D'oeuvres"]well i think that this is positively lovely and warms the heart.[/quote:f96d7974fc] thanyou x
  18. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:7cab513ce4="palrub"]constructively;

    pass on the lyrics to a band or write them for a bandmate i.e. singer - but i don't think you have what it takes to front a band.

    melody motif is alright for a 15second listen but then gets repetitive and thus boring. lyrically it's good but variation on the chorus would do the song a world of good. personally i think it draws draws too many parallels with Lonestar's [i:7cab513ce4]I'm Already There[/i:7cab513ce4] but many bands sing about the same things so can't fault you there.[/quote:7cab513ce4] im not the frontman i guess i should hve got someone that can sing i only wanted to get a feel of how others would take to it it wasnt easy puting it on but feck it it,s done and the response has been not been good but you have to try these things
  19. avatar aaronrossi
    is the video deleted now?

    I am intrigued!!!
  20. avatar goatboy
    I had a bit of a listen and it was really quite poor. The internet is a better place now that it's been taken down.

    I'm just curious as to what Owen Morris has heard to invite this guy over to his studio to record?

    I think someone is either taking the piss or is absolutely mental.
  21. avatar aaronrossi
    thats exactly what I wanted to find out - surely this was the same person that was saying that he was invited over recently...
  22. avatar salfhal
    [quote:d47fa9daca="goatboy"]I think someone is either taking the piss or is absolutely mental.[/quote:d47fa9daca]

    It's the latter.

    And yes, it is the same guy who claimed to be picked up my Owen Morris. Then admitted that he made it all up.

    Strange person like.
  23. avatar 10rapid
    get it up again tae fuck!
  24. avatar dolphin bombers
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O5WJCT8qXdc fuck the system and all of you
  25. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:6bc1b12b5f="salfhal"][quote:6bc1b12b5f="goatboy"]I think someone is either taking the piss or is absolutely mental.[/quote:6bc1b12b5f]

    It's the latter.

    And yes, it is the same guy who claimed to be picked up my Owen Morris. Then admitted that he made it all up.

    Strange person like.[/quote:6bc1b12b5f] when did i admit i was lying
  26. avatar dolphin bombers
    and before you all star slagging D.L.A superstar read the lyrics on my blog its on myspace and you will see it is the greatest song ever wrote , and my singing is probally the worst youll ever hear on youtube ever> hence the reason i need a singer, as for owen morris he has invited me over in the new year that is a FACT fone him and ask him he,ll tell you!! ring 118118 and ask for the guy who invented brickwalling ps hes from wales if that narrows things down , im no noel gallagher or gary lightbody i am aware of these facts what i really am is a poor guy on the dole that is trying something new so please leave me alone and let me dream of ulster hall stardom even stiff kitten would do ..peace and love scotty
  27. avatar TapeAndTippex
    I don't understand you. Please be somewhere else.
  28. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:54486a2189="TapeAndTippex"]I don't understand you. Please be somewhere else.[/quote:54486a2189] feelings mutual
  29. avatar bottleofsmoke
    boring. next
  30. avatar salfhal
    [quote:3e6a05cd63="dolphin bombers"]when did i admit i was lying[/quote:3e6a05cd63]

    [quote:3e6a05cd63="dolphin bombers"]i was expecting a bigger pounding than i have already got, thanx to all that took part i knew it was gonna happening i have got my little 2 minutes of fame and you all wont forget SUICIDE DOLPHIN BOMBERS in a hurry well ok maybe you have already seriously but i have a dream and i think it will happen[/quote:3e6a05cd63]
  31. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:9dbd206a2c="salfhal"][quote:9dbd206a2c="dolphin bombers"]when did i admit i was lying[/quote:9dbd206a2c]

    [quote:9dbd206a2c="dolphin bombers"]i was expecting a bigger pounding than i have already got, thanx to all that took part i knew it was gonna happening i have got my little 2 minutes of fame and you all wont forget SUICIDE DOLPHIN BOMBERS in a hurry well ok maybe you have already seriously but i have a dream and i think it will happen[/quote:9dbd206a2c][/quote:9dbd206a2c] were does it say i was lying about owen morris ?????????????????????
  32. avatar Deestroyer
    [edit: *runs away*]
    Last edited on , 1 times in total.
  33. avatar salfhal
    [img:9059ba88fb]http://img2.allposters.com/images/WIL/PEA0334.jpg[/img:9059ba88fb]
  34. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:56489d6a2a="salfhal"][img:56489d6a2a]http://img2.allposters.com/images/WIL/PEA0334.jpg[/img:56489d6a2a][/quote:56489d6a2a] thanx for the ecouragment giys all i can hear is that rcky tune im head over and over and with your support and encouragement i will be playing aunt annies in no time ps thanx again it means so much to me xx big manhugs scotty
  35. avatar Chris Madden
    dont worry, just keep trying, and dont listen to these comments too much, these opinions arent, being given by musical masterminds,
  36. avatar salfhal
    [quote:4295cf8f81="Chris Madden"]dont worry, just keep trying, and dont listen to these comments too much, these opinions arent, being given by musical masterminds,[/quote:4295cf8f81]

    Nope, just by musicians who are [b:4295cf8f81]actually[/b:4295cf8f81] successful on the local scene...
  37. avatar palrub
    http://video.aol.co.uk/video-detail/dla-superstar/1433353972

    i love the hand on desk drum roll.
    the lyrics are definately not the best in the world. at first i thought you were just deluded, but now i see that you're taking the complete piss.
  38. avatar Chi-Lite
    Sounds like the Proclaimers.

    I think you're mixing up DLA with DHLA though

    I personally love this one though. Like a young Jake Burns with a lisp. Fucking brilliant.:lol:

    [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uzRu6jjhOCE&feature=channel/url]"please man, stick to your peace plan
    and give our heads some fucking peace man".

    Quality gear.
  39. avatar my-angel-rocks
    I like it
  40. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:bd60553523="salfhal"][quote:bd60553523="Chris Madden"]dont worry, just keep trying, and dont listen to these comments too much, these opinions arent, being given by musical masterminds,[/quote:bd60553523]

    Nope, just by musicians who are [b:bd60553523]actually[/b:bd60553523] successful on the local scene...[/quote:bd60553523] who r u dude give me a link i wanna check u out !!
  41. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:16323c0b0e="Chi-Lite"]Sounds like the Proclaimers.

    I think you're mixing up DLA with DHLA though

    I personally love this one though. Like a young Jake Burns with a lisp. Fucking brilliant.:lol:

    [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uzRu6jjhOCE&feature=channel/url]"please man, stick to your peace plan
    and give our heads some fucking peace man".

    Quality gear.[/quote:16323c0b0e] i do somehow seem to have a lisp on this your lol good job im not the frontman lol http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vd3d3LnlvdXR1YmUuY29tL3dhdGNoP3Y9dXpSdTZqamhPQ0U=
  42. avatar Sadoldgit
    No doubt Simon Cowell will be along in a minute to offer you a contract for 50 squillion quid.

    I didnt think it was ironic, or funny and its not a demo.

    It strikes me as the sort of thing usually seen on Saturday night , laugh at the people thinking they have talent when they dont, shows.

    You have balls posting it, I`ll give you that.
  43. avatar dolphin bombers
    HERES RIOT SONG WITHOUT THE LISP LOL http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vd3d3LnlvdXR1YmUuY29tL3dhdGNoP3Y9SVBiVFVEYjZ1OUE=
  44. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:94f2f19ecd="Sadoldgit"]No doubt Simon Cowell will be along in a minute to offer you a contract for 50 squillion quid.

    I didnt think it was ironic, or funny and its not a demo.

    It strikes me as the sort of thing usually seen on Saturday night , laugh at the people thinking they have talent when they dont, shows.

    You have balls posting it, I`ll give you that.[/quote:94f2f19ecd] LIGHTEN UP MR MELDREW I DONT GIVE A FUCK ABOUT SIMON COWELL OR GETTING SIGNED ITS NOT THAT GREAT BEING IN A BAND CONSTNTLY TOURING IM HAVING FUN DOING THIS X PEACE OUT SCOTTY
  45. avatar my-angel-rocks
    [quote:e048ded58f="Sadoldgit"]its not a demo.[/quote:e048ded58f]

    Why not?
    Its a demostration of song writing and singing ability
    Sure, the song writing and singing ability demonstrated isn't the best
    but I've heard worse.
  46. avatar anty2
    If you had some vocal training it might work. Get a band and make it into a full song for people to wrap their ears around. Also Chris, chrissy chris chris Madden

    "dont worry, just keep trying, and dont listen to these comments too much, these opinions arent, being given by musical masterminds,"

    Why, do, you, insist, on, using, so, many, comma's,?,

    I apologise for everybody on here giving feedback as they are not musicial masterminds like yourself. How can any musician hold a big welsh Diana tipped candle on your solo work? Care to link us to it again Axl?
  47. avatar Kristam Moffett
    [quote:3106e5933f="dolphin bombers"]X PEACE OUT SCOTTY[/quote:3106e5933f]

    am i the only to think this 'peace out' is hilarious



    p.s. the whistle solo in the riot song is simply outstanding
  48. avatar tinpot anto
    There's a song on our album called Riot Song.
  49. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:360abe08bd="tinpot anto"]There's a song on our album called Riot Song.[/quote:360abe08bd] are you planning on paying me royalties lol
  50. avatar dolphin bombers
    [quote:6fae857c42="anty2"]If you had some vocal training it might work. Get a band and make it into a full song for people to wrap their ears around. Also Chris, chrissy chris chris Madden

    "dont worry, just keep trying, and dont listen to these comments too much, these opinions arent, being given by musical masterminds,"

    Why, do, you, insist, on, using, so, many, comma's,?,

    I apologise for everybody on here giving feedback as they are not musicial masterminds like yourself. How can any musician hold a big welsh Diana tipped candle on your solo work? Care to link us to it again Axl?[/quote:6fae857c42] thanx for your concerns, but do not worry i am thick skinned and dont take anything to heart i am in the middle of getting a band together but it is not easy living in ballymoney i may aswell be in timbucktwo..but thanx again for your support amd comments ,,,peace and love scotty
  51. avatar Deestroyer
    [img:95a0db5f18]http://www.hokiesports.com/rothreport/images/mali.timbuktu.jpg[/img:95a0db5f18]
  52. avatar tinpot anto
    [img:174811b123]http://blog.tmcnet.com/blog/tom-keating/images/general-zod-kneel.jpg[/img:174811b123]

    Alright, alright, calm the fuck down, [i:174811b123]before ZOD.[/i:174811b123]